That guy won the race...wanna win tomorrow.
Wanna set the pace...to lead tomorrow!!
Today's to deal with these nerds...not tomorrow.
Have to write heartfelt words...surely tomorrow.
Wanna pen that thought...maybe tomorrow!!
Say sorry to the friend i fought...perhaps tomorrow!!
Hey dad,me busy today...will u meet me...tomorrow?
Hi Lady,not today but we can have a tea...surely tomorrow?
Can i kiss those curls...on a joyful morrow?
And paint a dream for a loving tomorrow
Will u be with me...in joy & in sorrow?
but she's gone today...where's tomorrow?
'Tomorrow' came today it went
My guilt piles up when do i repent?
Those folks i love
they may be hurt,they may be sore.
If i didn't meet them today
they might think i m a lore.
Wanna call each one of them
& say "Hi Hello Good day!!
Can u meet me, O dear friend,
sometime TODAY??"
4 comments:
February 22, 2007 at 12:27 PM
Wanted to comment on your poem today..not tomorrow!
Try to maintain the flow..lesser you wander, lesser the sorrow!
I am no poet, but have suggestions that you can borrow
When u iron out some flaws,u will be one..one day for sure, if not tomorrow!
Nice one buddy.I specially liked this line, "Tomorrow came today it went"..how true. Time goes on, and we don't realize when tomorrow becomes yesterday..a good thought.
February 22, 2007 at 1:49 PM
February 22, 2007 at 9:55 PM
"Will u be with me...in joy & in sorrow?
but she's gone today...where's tomorrow"
These lines are really nice and they tell you a person's value.
You seriously realise a person's value aftre you lose him/her.
Overall a nice thought
December 10, 2007 at 8:41 PM
Hey ravi...
i read these lines again and again..and just wonder..how do u manage to put these feelings so beautifully together...awesome.....
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